Final for Robin Hood. Didn't get a chance to fix some issues or really polish it at the end. (his long leg, feet, and hand) As well as some other issues.
(About the pose) "Move all the action out of the center plane, open up the pose, do a 3/4 if that helps, and do some silhouette studies (they should only take 5 or 10 minutes). Generally you do these with marker or charcoal, no detail is put in them. He recommends getting "The Skillful Huntsman".
(About the perspective) "Take a picture of yourself doing the pose, there's some foreshortening issues with his arms."
(Lastly, About the color) "You have a strong green background, and either a neutral or warmly lit character. It's good because it separates the character from the background, but there's no bounce off the character. We should see consistency between the lighting of the character and the environment."
(Composition) "The strap on the leg _has_ to be in a different line than the sword, currently it looks like the sword is passing through the character's legs. Just don't do cloth. Do it later, only after the image is 100% done."
"Everything else looks way better, it's a global improvement on your previous pieces."
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Keenan said:
(About the pose) "Move all the action out of the center plane, open up the pose, do a 3/4 if that helps, and do some silhouette studies (they should only take 5 or 10 minutes). Generally you do these with marker or charcoal, no detail is put in them. He recommends getting "The Skillful Huntsman".
(About the perspective) "Take a picture of yourself doing the pose, there's some foreshortening issues with his arms."
(Lastly, About the color) "You have a strong green background, and either a neutral or warmly lit character. It's good because it separates the character from the background, but there's no bounce off the character. We should see consistency between the lighting of the character and the environment."
(Composition) "The strap on the leg _has_ to be in a different line than the sword, currently it looks like the sword is passing through the character's legs. Just don't do cloth. Do it later, only after the image is 100% done."
"Everything else looks way better, it's a global improvement on your previous pieces."
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